|Reviews for Pen To The Paper|
| xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
I really like this.
The verses that are in italics really add to the piece.
I especially love: "A rose by any other name would still smell as sweet,
but I highly doubt it'd hold the same shock when that
perfect rose (by any other name) causes you to bleed.
Thorns, my darling, cannot be disguised.
And that's what you are... a thorn in my side.
(and I mean that in the worst/best possible way.)"
"I'll leave you alone to your inevitable failure.
(you can insert malicious laughter here.)
And, believe me; I'll be laughing all the way."
Excellent word choice. The ending sounds so threatening. Great piece!
| Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
I love this ending, you sound so confident, scary almost. I like it.
Keep it up.