methinks. . . You should update this wonderful and exciting story. . . Unless grown bored of it and don't want to? :(

I like the idea that you have with this story and it's always great to read about people as pretty as Dominic and Natalia! :)

However, I felt that their first meeting fter 200 years should have been more...grand!

Good story. It's a shame you haven't updated in so long.

where. is. the. rest?

Your plot is good.

However, I suggest you reread it. Certain parts of chapters don't match up. For example, you end a chapter with a conversation, and begin with an unannounced charecter (Chapters 10-12).

Also, your first chapter was amazing, but after that, you just kept adding things that contradicted each other.

Example: Natalia has no contact with anyone besides Mack and Nyx - Natalia works for mafia, has friends that she loves.

I love this storry... I think I'm in love with dominic hahahaha

I hope you continue with this cuz its serioous stuff

Amalina Knight.

ooh. love the story already!

I read all 21 chapters in like an hour or so & it was intense! I love it and please update more soon!

gahh ,

they seem to be getting shorter & shorter .

but that was really good .

(:

update soon !

:D

Finally!

Is Natalia having a hate/love relationship with Dominic?

I'm so proud of you! *sniffle* lol - I haven't updated anything in, like, two freaking months. I've betaed quite a bit, though. And done plenty of homework avoiding. lol. I fail. Epically. D Great chapter, though, great chapter. You DON'T fail. lol.

I love this story!

You take so long in between update I'm kinda wondering if I should stop checking every day...

Wow! Gargoyles thrown in the mix? Sounds interesting! Odis seems funny though! Can't wait to read more! :)

I still like it. :) Hope you keep writing more ofton and all that good stuff. The problem with not putting up new chapters is that you forget what happened last time you read. I understand that you were busy I'm just explainging though.

Killer Chipmunk