|Reviews for Storm's Witch|
| Ricard Falos chapter 10 . 7/18/2011
I loved it hehe, storm and erin and damon and tori they were adorable. I love the sarcasm and the naughty innuendos, overall i say it was a good read though I do think you kind of went to far in too quick. Wasn't much relationship building but nonetheless I still loved it :) can't wait to read damons part
| DianaSweetie chapter 10 . 10/11/2009
I love ur story it's so ... Idk , but it's great I love it!
Storm is great I love him, he's so sweet and manly
At the same ! Erin is great to she's a sweetie.
Oh! I also LOVE Ven! He's a cutie pie. Hahahaha.
| I'm-The-Weird-Girl chapter 10 . 7/29/2009
wow that really was as corny as hell
but i guess that's y i read it
awesome story though!
| ashjamwoo chapter 10 . 1/28/2009
Haha! OMFG! Short and sweet story! Lovedd it
| Kimera77 chapter 10 . 12/14/2008
Okay. A lot to say. First: plot. You should define more the climax and the plot in general. It kind of a whatever-happen-happens-story. Second: development. At first, it gives the impression the story is going to have a long development, and when it ends, the reader gets the feeling the story was rush, and didn't reach its full potential. Third: You could give a little more insight of the characters. Even if the do have a story, one doesn't feel completely connected. Plus, you should really warn when the POV's change. It's kind of confusing, and it takes out a lot of the story. I liked the story, but I feel it could be so much better with a good revision and more planing. But, anyway, Keep it up!
| MyDecoy chapter 10 . 10/28/2008
loved it )
| sally scribe chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
i love your story
it's an amazing idea.
now...for my critisms...love the idea but it got confused whose pov you were talking in. i advice you to pick one, be netral with no pov at all, or write who's pov you are talking in.
your story is really good, this version should serve as a rough draft and template for further reference as you rewrite and make this story more real. be a writer. take that extra mile to describe. we love details!
| Elodie Wolfe chapter 10 . 9/9/2008
stakesteak or did he actually eat wood?
wow that sounds wrong
LOVED IT, loved the idea, I want Storm, or like when Ven grows up, and like you are AMAZING, new favorite author, and I only like five or six of my 16 favs so yah. Can't wait for more,
AND FINISH ALL YOUR OTHER STORIES! SO I CAN PRAOISE YOU!
(do you have a myspace?)
| BlossomTabz chapter 10 . 7/3/2008
it was corny but cute at the same time...loved it...may read the other one if i dont get to addicted to the sims...again:p
| TC the terminator chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
Great story wolfeh!
| dreamercrys chapter 10 . 6/2/2008
Woohoo...evil bad guy is dead. Can't wait to see what happens next...
| crazylady4 chapter 6 . 3/19/2008
i love this please update soon. Storm is brilliant!
| ByTheMoonlight chapter 6 . 3/15/2008
oh! I can't wait to read the next chapter Wolfie!
| MyWandIsHappyToSeeYou chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
I love this! Very oridional! :) Nice work!
| ByTheMoonlight chapter 5 . 2/25/2008
Oh! I liked it Wolfie! x3 I liketh Ven! He's funny!