Reviews for Anomaly
Starart152 chapter 11 . 4/19
This is an interesting chapter that set up a lot of trouble now that Alexis, Leena and Sophie crossed path. What will happen next will be in the next part, but I do hope they won't begin the battle right there in the middle of the mall.
We got more characterization from Ash and how much of a gamer he is. I enjoyed watching his confidence in Metal Gear Solid break down when he couldn't answer one question.
Starart152 chapter 10 . 12/1/2023
This is a nice chapter where we discovered that Ash got an affinity too. He was better than the two girls thought when he decided to act upon it in the battle.
I like how the relationship between Sophie and Ash goes. The two bounced together well and it's fun to see their banters.
Starart152 chapter 9 . 4/19/2023
This is an interpreting and important extra that gives more detail into the world building. The secrets from the light and darkness affinity is giving me the impression they might be major player later on with the darkness affinity being more on the antagonist side than the light.
Starart152 chapter 8 . 10/23/2022
This is a good chapter where me meet another important character who got her power Felicia. It's also good to learn a bit about the gods who gave their power and the bit of different personalities they have.
Starart152 chapter 7 . 6/4/2022
This is a nice way to end the first volume. They managed to avoid trouble and life seems to be partially back to normal for the girls.
I wonder what is waiting for them next with the other anomalies they will encounter in their life from now on.

As for Leena, I wonder what caused some of her partial memory lost and why it would be bad that she remembers them.
Starart152 chapter 6 . 1/21/2022
This is a nice chapter that showed how Leena can use her power to fight back against her enemies. She is like an Earth Bender in Avatar. As for Michael, he got what he deserved in the end. He was always destructing himself and he literally caused his own demise at the end.
Starart152 chapter 5 . 8/27/2021
This is a nice chapter where we see a clear and violent downfall of Michael as he lost his face and celebrity. As for Mia, she is a dangerous woman to put such a trap for Leena and Michael in a deadly battle where she would let Sophie help Leena later.
I wonder what would happen next and how this will end up.
Starart152 chapter 4 . 4/3/2021
This is a nice chapter that prepared for the next one. I wonder what will happen to Leena and Michael. What Mia said isn't really good for Michael to whatever she had in her mind.
As for Leena, she is a good person and she might be in something much bigger than she wanted to be by helping that man.
Starart152 chapter 3 . 10/11/2020
This is a nice chapter as we discovered more about what is going on in the story and what the characters are doing. Their motivation to come to Tempest City is an interesting one.
I am wondering what is going on in the city and why humans are getting power as the government is searching for them and Mia shows up to get her revenge on that Michael man.
Starart152 chapter 2 . 3/28/2020
This is a nice chapter where we see the outcome of the battle against Alexis. There is a bit of putting her as a more complex character.
As for the news at the end of the chapter, it gives a nice introductions to many characters that will become more important as the story progress.
Starart152 chapter 1 . 1/26/2019
This is a nice end for an introductory chapter between many characters. The writing is good and the pacing is balanced so far. As for the characters, their personality is interesting and we can see that Leena and Sophia feels like two main characters, but it also feels like there is much more to know about Alexis too.
dmasterxd chapter 1 . 6/25/2017
I really love the descriptions and dialogue here. Story seems a bit slow for me to have too much of an opinion on it yet but that is to be expected considering the chapter length.

Alexis and Sophie are pretty interesting so far. Definitely can't wait to see where this goes. Nice start!
Darth Zannacross chapter 107 . 8/22/2015
Damn, at the epilogue all ready, how far we come, ( Cracks neck) All right lets do this.

Well, looks like Collin had a bit of regret for being a grade A Jackass but, far to late to feel any sympathy for him now, still glad he got as painful a death as the deaths he gave to others, guess it shows he was not a outright devil but still, you reap what you sow.

So at long last its clear the battle is over but the war has just begun( Looks at the title of the next book) Called it, lol. Waiting two years, what a drag, at least its not three years like Naruto had to wait lol.

Well, at least Vy and Evan and Leon and Keggy seem to be doing well in the aftermath.

Same with Roy and Leena, if Roy can survive Alex's tests lol.

Meanwhile, Jade is still up to something, and, is he talking to Leena's father? Good greif that, turns the table on a few things, anyone near Leena when she finds out this little fact is going to be in trouble, double so if its the father.

Well, at least Axel has been forgiven, even if the romantic spark has not reignited there is still hope lol.

And, glad Alexis and Ash are both ok after all the trauma, nice that Sophia called at the end but, regretful she did not take part in the final conflict, oh well at least she is still a friend. Well, not sure what happened to a few like Mia but, guess that's for another time.

So, we reached the end of the line with Anomaly, not the total end so, I will avoid doing a completely absolute review of the entire cast for the sake of only doing it once but, time for a overview lol. Firstly, I noticed you STILL have not finished the complete profiles after all theses years, arg, wanted to see a few like Seth or Sophia's lol.

Anyway, I think this is my favorite story on the site, with the exception of my own lol. The cast did rival Bleach or other anime at times but, while some did seem to at first seem to be overbearing, with he exception of some of the luckless east cost members nearly the entire cast felt fully fleshed out and had more achievements then most cast in other long running series like Bleach have gotten, poor Kiba from Naruto or Chad from Bleach wish they could be in this series so they could have something worthwhile to talk about lol.

Leena, Sophia, Ash, Alexis , Justine and more, while at first it seemed like you were nearly creating a Power Puff girls like group they managed to all stand out, and had cool action with a surprising amount of drama then one might suspect.

You also managed to make Seth quite the intense bad guy, a 100 chapter story and he never went through the villain decay that some like Orochimaru in Naruto or many comic book bad guys went through, haha, of course if he returns in the next chapter we will see how that changes. Did not seem to have the most depth, I guess he was just a power hungry jerk so he did his role well, and we will see if there is any more to that story.

Collen was quite a effective traitor bad guy, Axel was the fake traitor bad guy lol, Garth, was a bit of a fool in the end, he seemed to fail to see why trusting Seth would not end well lol. Some like Kat and Liz seemed to overlap at being Seth fan boys, some like Valor seemed underutilized, and Jade was just a tease lol, still hoping to see him use his Mystic Art or something before the end of the series hahaah.

Oh well, the cast did grow both physically and emotionally and the stakes sure as hell got tenser and tenser, the mark of a solid story.

I suppose that's enough for now, I will save the rest for when you finish the next story, I will start War soon but for now epic job with Anomaly, I see your next story is not finished yet but I hope you finish it because, cliffhangers are the worst lol. I noticed your a digimon fan, I am to, another reason I hope you manage to check out my Zilos story one day.

Well, hope that day comes but till then Ritiz thanks for the epic story, and till next time.
Darth Zannacross chapter 106 . 8/21/2015
Ah, so the final battle starts with Alexis not giving up, arg, that's one hardcore brainwashing. Meanwhile, Seth is as vicious as ever but, thankfully for Evan Gabby decided to chance sides, or, just break free of Seth's hold.

I admit, I expected Collen to fall first and Seth to go all final boss form, did not think Leena would not even take part in his defeat, though, I wonder if he is truly defeated, if you don't see final bosses vaporize piece by piece they will come back lol.

Well, I guess Vy was the one who pulled the main hero power up Shockley, she was one of the lesser characters for such a while, I guess you did a better job giving a wide cast big moments then Bleach ever did lol.

Still, Gabby redeemed herself with a rather noble act, reminded me of when Sasuke took the near fatal blow from Haku, well, we will see if she got a lucky break as well.
On the other hand, we have someone who CLEARLY has no redemption at this point, you would think Collin would at least care about his brother but he is clearly pure evil, joy.

Well, Axel pulled off a even big hero moment, quite the role reversal, and a epic shot at redemption, to bad the true traitor is quite the monster, thankfully with a little help from Alexis and Roy they were finally able to subdue his rage, I admit it feels a tad bit anti climactic that Yoshiro just jumps in to off him but, I guess not as big a let downs as Aizen and Madara Uchia's defeats were lol.

Well, bad end for quite the bad guy, but at last its truly over, or is it? I still wonder if Kat and Seth survived, guess we will find out one way or another and, there is still Seth's boss, the Emperor? We will see.

But, a epic and grand final battle with fitting action and drama so, great job, see you at the finale.
Darth Zannacross chapter 105 . 8/20/2015
And so the big showdowns begin, Collen ranks up the jerk points each chapter theses days, Seth is not far behind though.

Seth just seems to hate everything and indeed has quite the god complex, him killing Evan's parents would make him on the same jerk level of Collen but, Collen is more annoying lol.

Well, both of theses showdowns have been great with both action and drama, that flashback sealed the deal with how much Collen was betrayed.

Well, quite hyped for how this showdown concludes so keep up the great work and till next time.
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