|Reviews for Anomaly|
| RBA chapter 13 . 6/16/2008
Good! Another chapter! Me like! There's a lot of details in there!
| Tomni chapter 13 . 6/16/2008
Bah..stupid Ash... lucky shot, lucky shot... *grumbles*
anyway, good job! I liked it mucho my friend. You're getting better and better and better!
| Ray2theK chapter 13 . 6/16/2008
woot, acctually it looks really good nice job
| Tomni chapter 12 . 6/11/2008
Hm yay for asshole Ace and his asshole ways of asshole-ness!
heh i am intrigued and amused...and look, all caught up :-P
| Tomni chapter 11 . 6/11/2008
I almost forgot to comment! hehe MGS4...wow haha interesting Josh, very interesting. I like it and i thought the whole Felicia/Alexis relationship is awesome... so lets hope this makes some fun fun drama
| Tomni chapter 10 . 6/9/2008
Comment so you know I am done... :-P
| Tomni chapter 8 . 6/8/2008
Glad to see there wasn't another rape by tentacles. Hah good job with the chapter and all that. Look look, catching up see? Aren't you happy? BE HAPPY!
| Tomni chapter 7 . 6/7/2008
Lookie lookie! A reply by me! Huzzah huzzah and rejoicing all around!
ok so it was pretty good man, very nicely written and all. Good plot, good comedy and good overall written-nessity.
| donkey chapter 12 . 6/3/2008
I can't help but femslash these characters at times...:pek
And yay! More Yoshino! I've been wondering about her. :lolwut
Can't wait to loudly read next time.
| Cyonic Power chapter 12 . 6/3/2008
I can't think of much to mention. It was an interesting chapter. Yoshino seems like she'll be an interesting character to watch, and her opinion seems to be the same as Mia as far as Eclipse goes. HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAP!
| Carrie chapter 12 . 6/3/2008
wow. I really absolutely love how you wrote that flash back for Alexis. that was amazingly well done. i love how you're creating her. she's turning out way better than I ever imagined.
that was a well done chapter nonetheless. next artwork piece you do should be of alexis, hee hee :D
| Youko chapter 12 . 6/2/2008
Nice. It was fun reading this chapter. I'm liking Yoshino so far. She seems to have a different personality when there's conflicts that needs to be solved. Oh, and some Alexis backstory, yay!
“Remove yourself from my presence.”
Hope this will be a good fight.
| RBA chapter 12 . 6/2/2008
I thought of not commenting, for the fun of not commenting. Then... I thought about it and since I don't have anything better to do, I comment. Good chappy. Really good chappy. I can't wait for the fight...
| Ray 2 the K chapter 12 . 6/2/2008
HA! Thats good man the blind girls gonna kick ass
| ayumidah chapter 12 . 6/2/2008
I comment via MSN! XP But anyway, ok, so Ash/Amy FTW! Ok? Ok. XD Good chapter, I like Yoshino a lot so far.