Reviews for true love
Eirien chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
As has been said in the previous reviews, the imagery is wonderful. I love the melancholy tone, the way you use images of nature to express a love that persists even through rains, whether these rains symbolize the passage of time (the other person having perhaps left a long time ago) or the problems weathered together. A beautiful poem expressing feelings I can definitely relate to.
Basara chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
how it's been all set in perfect memory... like how a sound of music is tinged repeatedly in mind...

right2reality chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
I really liked this. The imagery you used fitted so perfectly, and the connotation of ‘broken’ added an underlying sense of despondency which I thought was particularly effective. Keep up the good work!

Kaia Zeffirelli chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
Oh, I love this! Amazing imagery! I can relate... Great job! Keep it up!

-Katrina Zeffirelli
MallowsWins chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
The imagery in this haiku is truly amazing. The whole poem flows beautifully, too. I love how there is a subtle melancholy behind the words, too.

Peace, Daze
Dreaming Chica chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
Wow, the imagery in this poem was absolutly amazing! It makes you stop and really think about what you wrote!


Dreaming Chica