Reviews for Pilgrimage of a Comet
RandyPandy chapter 1 . 9/10/2008
This is a very interesting take - I had once considered that everything was sentient, but sentient comets had never crossed my mind before.

There were some very powerful lines in this poem that drives the moral home. Well done.
billy chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
you know this story is- for lack of a better word- deep. and although i don't understand its deepness too well because i never bothered to be deep for more than 5 hours at a time, i kinda like it. its definitely not boring in its deepness. its got that aspect of a story that makes one want to keep reading it. the one that makes you wonder- "what will happen next".

i'm tired of saying "well-written" but it is. its definitely interesting and sweet.

regards,

billy
Rhea Garfield chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
Wow. Another really well-written one.

It's very original - you see stories all the time written about sentient stars, blah blah, but I've rarely read one about sentient comets. Or never, actually.

"Only fools seek wisdom" is a very powerful line.

And I love the ending. Bittersweet - it makes you stop and think.
SEVEN TENTHS ON FICTIONPRESS chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
Wow. Very well written, and it gives a scientific viewpoint as well. I loved it. The combination of science and poetry is a very good one, and this story is awesome!