Reviews for Smitten and Bitten |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Cool. I'm glad you got another chapter posted! I mean, I did have to go back and re-read it, but I still liked it! So hurry up and post another one! :) -OHS |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant. Of course, it's always that way, is it not? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was worth the wait. Well, at least Matthias didn't get killed for his stupidity. Can't beleive he still thinks this is all fake after what he's been through XD. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh...talk about a a way to ruin your chances. Ouch. So vampires and Ferals are distinct species. That was a cool scene when the whole headquarters started chasing Matt for the reward. And who is this new side that has showed up? Please, update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm. That was a risky thing to do, insulting demons...but still funny! I'm still wondering what a Feral is, but i can't wait to switch to Matt's POV. Good job on this chapter. Kit's character is cool. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was great. Matt's kind of a jerk, but now it gets more interesting. Are Ferals this world's version of vampires? I can't wait to find out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know, I was just complaining (to myself) that there are no decent writers on this site anymore. Clearly, I just hadn’t looked hard enough. I really love the characterization in this chapter. It really read smoothly and was funny, as well as well rounded. I’m usually cautious when approaching a vampire story, but you seem to be proving here that it can still be done without being a cliché, which is a huge bonus. I have to say, the opening scene with Matt was the best thing I’ve read in a while. I actually laughed out loud at the ‘Well, there goes girlfriend number thirty three’ line. Well done so far, and when it isn’t midnight on a weekday, I’ll be reading more of this. Peace, Daze |
![]() ![]() ![]() So when people review my stuff, I like to check out their stuff and see what they're up to. I found this one to be rather cool, your take on the vampires interesting with the Ferals and their abilities. The Huntress was different from the usual slayers and hunters I read, with the shapeshifting and the Seeker companion/aide. Very curious, indeed. Your dialog and interaction between characters worked pretty good, always something I look for in a story. Without that, a story is a chore to read rather then a joy, so good on you. Very strong descriptive skills, made things easy for me to visualize in my head. I also very much approve of your action scene writing skills...brownie points for that. A good start. and you sprinkled enough hints at the potential of something bigger happening to make me want to read more. I'll keep an eye on this to see where it goes from here. Nice title, by the way. Cheers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. I really like your character Claret. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have the ditinct feeling he just made a fool of both hinslef AND Claret... Of course, who wouldn't get that feeling? Right on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your writing is unbelievably extraordinary! I LOVE IT! I love this story, I love these characters, I love this setting, I love the dialogue and I absolutely love the way I get sucked right in the minute my eyes hit the page! Fantastic job, I hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great, amusing addition. Nice work. Keep writing! ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() o...I like it alot! And yeah...totally update some more! I miss this story so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful addition. It's been a pleasure to read. Keep writing! ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great beginning. It was humorous and enjoyable to read. Nice work. Thanks for the review of "Reckoning". I really appreciated it. ~Twilight Starr~ |