|Reviews for i can't see|
| The Sleep Of Reason chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
gorgeousness from the first word to the last line
I absoulutatootly lurved it!
How immature of me... (lol oh wells)
The Sleep Of Reason
| yodel a blue streak chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
I had to finish this poem because 'tea leaves' was in the first line...I think adding more imagery like that would grab attention more...kind of make the text a little bit fuller, more vibrant...unless you don't want it be...
| gg. lass chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
for some reason i really like this poem. nice job!
yours until the changes,