|Reviews for Watchers|
| Selarose chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
Wow, I totally though she was waiting for her lover to come back from sea or something lol. But, I guess, she did find a lover in the Doc?
| The Candle Thief chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
"Fearful. Formidable. Fantastic." lol, Totally appreciated the alliteration. XD
I thought it was a little too...deep for just talking about humpback wales? Like all the emotion seemed out of place? I dunno, it just left me feeling kinda odd...maybe down tone it a little bit and focus more on details. Paint a brighter picture for the reader.
| Midnight Adrenaline chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
I thought Jen was waiting for her boyfriend to come back or something. I love the twist!
| AnonymousWriter993 chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
:D Brilliant! I love the almost intimate, unspoken understanding between the two - fantastic theme choice!