Reviews for Horrorscape II
poison chapter 19 . 8/4/2008
Wow,that was somewhat unexpected.

Interesting ending though, i liked it.


Is there going to be a third?
A Droplet of Rain chapter 19 . 8/4/2008
wow. Vance. Should have known.

I wonder if GM killed him.

Thanks for the update. It was kind of cute in a chilling kind of way when GM said Val was the remedy to his poison.

Keep writing and updating!
ManicBlue chapter 19 . 8/4/2008
So GM was never playing a game with her? Or is it just that we all assumed he was going to be playing another game, and we were terribly mistaken? I never would've expected Vance to be the 2nd GM. I really thought it was the guy from that party. I'm totally confused, but I don't mind, because it was awesome! I never saw it coming. I'm excited for the rewrite! You're extremely talented, and you keep me pulled in. There was never a moment that i was bored with this story, or ever remotely close to being bored! Keep up the good work! By the way, I'd really buy the books if you got them published! _-
sunny-raindrop chapter 19 . 8/4/2008
It's over? *gapes* Way to come home from holiday...

Hm. I'm happy that GM not only didn't kill Val but saved her and in a way they ended up together. I'm sorry that there aren't more chapters left, it's always such a sad feeling. Don't worry about the ending, I don't think it's sappy though I was surprised by GM's "explanation". Greatly.

Maybe it's time I started rereading the first piece of the series and I'm looking forward to read the new version of this one. You have no reason to be not satisfied but it's a good thing if you aren't. Nice, huh? :) I mean, this way you are willing to improve and become even better but provide us new chapters and scenes at the same time. It's a win-win situation.

Kelly chapter 19 . 8/4/2008
This story is really good, only it doesn't make sense as to HOW Val fell for GM, and this story REALLY needs an epilogue; you can't expect us to be happily imagining a happily-ever-after after all that GM has put her through. Plus, the fact that we as an audience don't know his real name, or at least one that GM prefers Val to call him (that's not GM, since you've made it out to be threatening and impersonal), makes the fact that Val and GM are a couple all the more intangible to us.

Like wise, it doesn't make sense that Val would sleep with GM at all, even if by then she had subconsciously fallen for him. At the very least, she would put up a fight.
Therese chapter 19 . 8/3/2008
That was quite an ingenious ending. Sorry for not having been a diligent reviewer X). Your story ended well, though I can't really understand the depths of their romance. Black Roses seem to me, something of a stereotypical nature yeah? Ah, well :P.

I KNEW IT! *jumps around giddily* I was really waiting when he was gonna 'put the moves' on her, 'cuz like geez, their hate would build and build and build - that's gotta be some palpable hardcore romance there. Haw haw.

So she finds out she loves him, he still maintains his dangerous aura, I'm guessing..that they don't complete the Blindfold Chess game? Hmm, lots of unclosed cases. Yeah, your earlier story seemed somewhat more developed than this one with the ending, but the two main characters, Gavin and Valerian developed the most. SO GLAD :D heh, even though he is..after all a murderer.

(WHO CARES! He's hawt, tha's all that practically matters.)

perhaps..*pulls away from his addicting..self?*

Gah, good job anyways! Poor Valerian, she has a man who cares about her in some sick, devoted way.

But geez it makes for such good romance. Very deep I think. Way seductive ;).

So thanks for the updates again! And Kudoz on completing this story :B
JadeDream chapter 19 . 8/3/2008
Its over? what am i gonna read now? lol. Hmm how does she feel about him in the end? Finally give in to everything that is GM i mean really whats not to love...haha.
layne chapter 19 . 8/3/2008
that was... abrupt. it seemed like you spent the entire story building up to something, and then you rushed through the conclusion in the last chapter. there was no complication, the entire theme, climax of the story ended with no bang, but a muted thud. too simplistic. and the ending, it didn't quite make sense either. there are too many loose threads. mary, first of all. second of all, i think you were going for the deliberately ambiguous, Gone With the Wind-esque ending, but even for those sorts of endings to work there needs to be some closure. there was too much left unsaid, too much left unresolved. obviously, everyone likes a happy ending, but hello, GM is a mentally unstable murderer. there was no miraculous catharsis here. it's like you just got bored and wanted to be done with it. anyway, just a few things to consider in the re-write.
ally chapter 19 . 8/3/2008
No no no aad ending please... this is REALLY REALLY REALLY good.. i liked the ending.. but i do support your want to rewrite & improve.. :))
tffny012 chapter 19 . 8/3/2008
is it finished? What happened to mary and vance?
Essie chapter 19 . 8/3/2008
heh i love the ending! the meaning of the hemlock tied the story together perfectly.

I would suggest writing a bit about how GM found out the plan to be at the caves. And Mary ... what happenened to her?

Otherwise great stuff.
wookborm chapter 19 . 8/2/2008
Oh, my god! It was so not sappy!

Sappy would be him carrying her in his arms bridal style as the sun set behind them!

will the rewrite have a sad ending? 'cause i'd rather much just not read the re-write...

i'm a lover of happy endings, soo :P

... i love horrorscape. you're amazing. :)

major kudos to you, candid.

P.S. the male model? the one you picked to be GM is HOTHOTHOT. but i saw some pix of him smiling, and since he's pretty much GM, i got a little creeped out. :P
MsQueenOfTheWorld chapter 19 . 8/2/2008
The ending was kind of sudden. Wow. I expected it to be a little more drawn out, but it was still good. Very sappy. More romantic than horror. I can't be mad at all. God damn me and my romantic at heart issues. I loved the story. I'm glad you wrote it. :]
I Quoth Nevermore chapter 19 . 8/2/2008
Ooh, I liked the ending! so cute. I don't even care that/think it's sappy. Honestly, it's awesome. Maybe HS I? haha. Just kidding. That'd be great though. Can't wait for the rewrite!
sousie chapter 19 . 8/2/2008
i love it update the next chapter soon

{i like GM _ }
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