Reviews for Illegible
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
love the end
Neaera chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
I love the choice of words you used. The style seems sophisticated- but that's probably due to the style of words again. This made me just think a bit, and the ending was nice. I like how you broke out of your four lined stanzas to end the poem with just two separate lines and the question; it catches more dramatic attention than if it were to be in it's own stanza. Keep it up.