awesome absolutely amazing

It’s soooo CUTE and cheesy and well just a little bit rushed but not too much and I love that it’s got a lot of dialogues I love stories with a lot of dialogues but it’s seriously very VERY CUTE!

Awwwwww this is so cute! I hope the date went well lol 3

I love this :D Great story :)

I LOVE YOUR STORY SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO MUCH SO MUCH SO SO MUCH HAHAHAHA ITS JUST SO ROMANTIC!:D

it's not pathetic 2 b 16 and still single&never been in a relationship ( sry 4 retarded shortform i have a reason y i type like this. )

XD This is so cute :] I love the pick-up lines. Haha. They are so hilarious. I agree on what you said in your author's note, but it's still a cute and somewhat funny one-shot.

You have grammatical errors where you capitalize things where you don't need capitalization, or you put a period instead of a comma. It happens in your dialogue a lot. You might want to edit it, perhaps.

...haha xD But overall, this was so cute. Simple. Fluffy. Adorable.

Nicely done ;]

- silentsings

That was adorable. XD.

Such a swet boy- Ian. :D

gosh woman! your stories are so freakin cute xD i loved this, it was...well, pretty darn awesome. it made me want hug your characters :)

That was SO CUTE! I couldn't stop smiling the whole time!

Ian's such a sweet guy :3

SO Cute!

it's cute and i love it. it also nauseates me. (i have a really effed up opinion on love. heh.)

it reminds me of how i kinda started out with my current boyfriend. other than he's really weird and sick minded and less sweet...um, yeah.

good work. i'll shut up now.

-Jai Yukimura

haha

aw! that's so cute! :D :D :D

thanks so much for this cute oneshot! lol :)

MAJOR FLUFF XD

ANDILOVEDIT!