A great work...with a beautiful description. I am gld that I chose your work. The oneshot was really full of sparks and brought tingles down the spine.
Kepp up your great work. I am sure your story will even be as perfect as this was.

This story is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO cute! XD I love it! I wish you would continue it!

crazy story which is awesome, very very good ... luv it!

Ooh, I loved this! So sweet, and amazing. :)

It's good, I feel like you should develop their frienship a little more, you know not just say they're best friends, but other than that it was a nice read.

This was a perfectly written story about the transition from friendship to romance. You did a wonderful job describing her realization of the attraction between them. The kissing was a heady mixture of sexy and sweet. You conveyed the essence of their relationship and the beginning of something new for them. This was so well-written that I wouldn't change a thing in this lovely story.

Two words: FREAKING. AMAZING.

This was incredibly sweet

love it

200 hits and just 6 reviews? that's criminal:/

I enjoyed this story so much:) It's got perfect punctuation, grammar and spellings- It's obvious you've spent time on it and that you were committed to the story. Very good:)

The story itself, without adding unnecessary details had just the right amount of backstory so as not to leave the reader floundering.
and the end- just classy:)

I'll be looking out for more!

Written well and was very sweet :)

lol I luv it! XD

Theat was pretty ood

awwwwwwwwwwww

That was awesome! I loved it :D