Reviews for In the Kitchen |
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![]() ![]() cute! |
![]() ![]() my favourite fictionpress xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! Please continue writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great work...with a beautiful description. I am gld that I chose your work. The oneshot was really full of sparks and brought tingles down the spine. Kepp up your great work. I am sure your story will even be as perfect as this was. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO cute! XD I love it! I wish you would continue it! |
![]() ![]() crazy story which is awesome, very very good ... luv it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, I loved this! So sweet, and amazing. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's good, I feel like you should develop their frienship a little more, you know not just say they're best friends, but other than that it was a nice read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a perfectly written story about the transition from friendship to romance. You did a wonderful job describing her realization of the attraction between them. The kissing was a heady mixture of sexy and sweet. You conveyed the essence of their relationship and the beginning of something new for them. This was so well-written that I wouldn't change a thing in this lovely story. |
![]() ![]() Two words: FREAKING. AMAZING. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was incredibly sweet |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() 200 hits and just 6 reviews? that's criminal:/ I enjoyed this story so much:) It's got perfect punctuation, grammar and spellings- It's obvious you've spent time on it and that you were committed to the story. Very good:) The story itself, without adding unnecessary details had just the right amount of backstory so as not to leave the reader floundering. and the end- just classy:) I'll be looking out for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Written well and was very sweet :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol I luv it! XD |