Reviews for In the Kitchen
MoonxCandycane chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
Theat was pretty ood
heal me forever chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
Daughter of Athena x chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
That was awesome! I loved it :D
ToBreakMyFall chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
cute 3 :D
Guest chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
really, really good.
The Quotidian Life chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
Very cute. I found it adorable, just as true love should be. :D


The Quotidian Life
shadowwolf1345 chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
This is really cute. I like it. :)
Mione93 chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
I think it's really cute! reminds me of me and my bestfriend 3
frouwe chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
I liked it, and thought the characters had a lot of chemistry even if it is short. I particularly liked Ben's guardedness and how Helena wasn't all "oh-no-this-is-my-best-friend-I-never-saw-this-coming!"

I was confused by something he said, though; the thing about leaving her. Where is he going? I'd originally thought he just had something to do (like a family gathering) and that's why he couldn't stay long, but then he says "I wanted to tell you something before I leave you" or something of the kind, and that just sounded so final, you know? Like they won't see each other for months.
lostruined chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
Ahhh so cutee!
Sparky's Scribe chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
I really like this!

I can see it as a part of something bigger & I think it would make an engrossing read once complete :)

You write really well too. I especially liked your descriptions of the smaller details such as the thrumming heart and the cool fridge behind her.

Well done!
Cindy Marie chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
this was adorable:)
Somethingikno chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
I enjoyed this, it was really cute. I thought that Ben was perfect, and that line why don't you tell me again wasy favorite line inthe entire thing. It was great.
ChrisDrewRocksMyWorld124 chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
This was facking amazing! It was sweet but still intoxicating. Love it!
Brown-Eyed Chocoholic chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
This one fantastic and sweet oneshot. :D Definitely worth the read. I've always adored best friend love.
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