Theat was pretty ood

awwwwwwwwwwww

That was awesome! I loved it :D

cute 3 :D

really, really good.

Very cute. I found it adorable, just as true love should be. :D

Cheers

The Quotidian Life

This is really cute. I like it. :)

I think it's really cute! reminds me of me and my bestfriend 3

I liked it, and thought the characters had a lot of chemistry even if it is short. I particularly liked Ben's guardedness and how Helena wasn't all "oh-no-this-is-my-best-friend-I-never-saw-this-coming!"

I was confused by something he said, though; the thing about leaving her. Where is he going? I'd originally thought he just had something to do (like a family gathering) and that's why he couldn't stay long, but then he says "I wanted to tell you something before I leave you" or something of the kind, and that just sounded so final, you know? Like they won't see each other for months.

Ahhh so cutee!

I really like this!

I can see it as a part of something bigger & I think it would make an engrossing read once complete :)

You write really well too. I especially liked your descriptions of the smaller details such as the thrumming heart and the cool fridge behind her.

Well done!

this was adorable:)

I enjoyed this, it was really cute. I thought that Ben was perfect, and that line why don't you tell me again wasy favorite line inthe entire thing. It was great.

This was facking amazing! It was sweet but still intoxicating. Love it!

This one fantastic and sweet oneshot. :D Definitely worth the read. I've always adored best friend love.