Reviews for In the Kitchen
non.graceful chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
This was good. Hmm but I feel as if the emotions were far too quick to snap, you know what I mean? If you're shaking your head then I'll explain, if you weren't I apologize for the next few words. Okay he had it planned out that he was going to do this- either he'd be embarrassed or he'd be strong, looking forward to his accomplishment.

She should have been all 'what the hell' Or something like that.

Thanks for making this, it reminded me of my 'becoming one' story but this was so much better!
Robyn2250 chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
This was great. I liked that it was so short and sweet, it didn't need to be any longer. Well done!
DofD chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
katiegirl101199 chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
That was really cute and sweet. I loved it! :)

Great job.
Sam chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
I loved this story. Everything about it made me happy. How it started, how descriptive it was, how sweet, and how well you write )
Angeladex chapter 1 . 12/30/2010

This made me smile. Thank you.

It was cute, and engaging, and I was hooked! The chracters are very believable.


I believe I have found a new favorite story...


Or.Maybe.I.Would chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Aw... :3 One of the cutest stories ever read! I loved it a lot! :D
Ribena chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
Bitterblue23 chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
This was really good...I love stuff like this, where best friends sort of realise that they're more than just friends...XD
Nalowa chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
Wow that was amazing..I really have no suggestion or critism for this. Lmao it made me blush though and that is rare and the last bit made me laugh.

Keep up the good work and keep writing :D!

I will read more stories from you in the future
Ember Black chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
ohmigosh this is so sweet and cute :) Though, I don't understand how it's fantasy. but then again, i don't think we're meant to. I can't wait till the story this is from is up! :]
OrangeXAngel chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Like the others, I found this cute and sweet. :3 The description was vivid, and you have some great word choices there. Maybe one day, I'd see it as part of a bigger story. ;D Keep writing!
Fiashu chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Awesome, I love it. You built the suspense really well, although it was predictable were the story was heading. Then again i guess that's the point for such a short one-shot...
Becca chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
I love it, there isn't much backgroud, but that's okay because it's just a oneshot. I don't care how cliched the whole best friends falling for each other plot is, I still love reading these. I look forwrd to reading you're future writings.
x Farii chapter 1 . 5/27/2010

I liike ;)
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