Reviews for Stuck Between Pressed Pages Of A Scrapbook |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow! loved the story! |
![]() ![]() Ah, this chapter was funny too...!~ Hm, work on the grammar tho, okay? I think that if you improved in grammar then more people would read. c: Also... um... I know this is what most authors HATE to hear, but I think your characters are becoming just a TAD bit sue-ish. Don't worry though- just a TAD bit. But I have to say that I really love the humor, especially the muffin 8D Yaaaaay muffins! |
![]() ![]() This is the most adorable thing ever _ I may just have to login specifically to put this on story alert ;3 Hm... I think the grammar started out okay, but slowly got to be not as good in the end. I think the description was amazing though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude, I have been watching the chapter number all night to see how many chapters are left yet...I still thought "WTF it's not over-it can't be!" and checked the number, and yet here we are...I wish it wasn't over but sequel? yay! time to profile stalk- I mean...stalk? who said that? haha anyways great job on this story! I reall enjoyed it! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() DAMN... Garen has some gut pretending to be Cayden. I FUBING lurrrrvvvvvvv this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That emo shit is a real turn OFF. I was really liking the story too, what a shame. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm too lazy to elaborate but OMG PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON (Burning Down /coughahemcough) because you are so awesome this shits rainbows |
![]() ![]() ![]() what happened to Derek? :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() In the last chapters i was wondering where the hell did Jan and Jason go, but besides that i LOVED your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay, I'd like to say I REALLY LIKE THIS FIC! ITS REALLY GOOD but here's a tip It is actually not M rated put it on T rate (I mean, Its an AWESOME STORY AND I woudnt have found it if I havent searched for Twincest (seriously) you'd get more reviews if you put it on T XD) well, off to the sequel |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! Finally! They pulled it together. I've been waiting this part for the longest time! Hell! Felt great when they finally did it! I thought they would never do it and just parted ways! It's so close to the ending! You've done it very well! Thank you for writing this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! A really good start to a story, it drew me RIGHT in, which is kind of the point isn't it? Can't wait to get through reading the rest of it... I loved the daisy chain making and the girl cooties. So true. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omgomgomg!1! a sequel!1! yay! i'll go read it right now because this was just so graet! NOT although i read only the first and last chapters i must say this is so bad it's almost funny from the very first chapter (when they were seven) you make little uke seem like he's gonna grow boobs somewhere in the future (thus turning him into a shemale and defying the purpose of male/male), not to mention that he's girlier than any girl i know (and the first person naration makes me suspect you made him that way so you can identify better with him ;)) and in the last chapter we see that seme is a gorgeus sex god/manwhore wow, truly a mach made in heaven! |
![]() ![]() ![]() FDGHJHM,LJHIUFGFHXDKJGGHVKJFG LOVE LOVE LOVE |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love incest stories...twincest, even better. And they're so cute together! I'm still debating if I'm going to read the sequel, I usually hate them because they mess with the sweet,cuddly couples. Anyway, great story! ;) |