Reviews for I BREATHE FIRE
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
I like how you formatted "evaporate," it really adds a nice touch.
aimee kate chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
I loved it. It's unique and fresh. Have you ever been compared to T.S. Eliot before? You remind me of him. Very nice.
killer syntax chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
i absolutely love the short, ironic (again, lack of a better description) bursts in your poetry. the imagery created is so gripping. awesome job!
elemental writer chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
I rather enjoy the rhymes. They're fluid, not forced. The imagery, though, is my favorite. The last three lines make this piece for me.
Jon Blue chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
dang...I wrote somethin similar about exhalin fire...

GET OUTTA MY HEAD!

anyway that was good, rhyme really works here, it's short and excellent.
SheridanSpence chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
I'm not at all religious, but I actually really like this poem. The last two lines are great!