Reviews for Losing It
yanz chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
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I like the fact that the entire poem just flows so effortlessly and each line is just right. I also like the underlined and bold "hurt" - it emphasizes it a lot more and jumps off the page when you read it.

Oh & I love this line:

"Is our grip against the world,

Finally going astray."

Great job!
BalletManiac chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
This is AMAZING. I really liked it, no wait, I LOVED it!