Reviews for Forbidden Fruit
chocovic-chu chapter 1 . 5/7
My first Tomato-slash and I can't say that I won't see my tomato juice any different because of Marzano.
But it's cute! Thanks for sharing!
J chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
THIS IS THE BEST THING EVER HOMG
R. Ficst chapter 1 . 2/17/2014
Hahahah freaking hilarious and well-written. Great work.
Secrets chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
...omg...i cant breathe im laughing so hard!
WilHvAnAccntSoon chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
That...

Ummmmm...

TOMATO LUVVVVVV!

Tah, I love it...

What about cabbage...Or carrots...Or chili...Wow , that'll be hot...

Thanks, I enjoyed the Story...
Crystal chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
I loved it! You are really creative to think up a story about two gay tomatoes and I'm probably crazy for loving it, but to hell with that! Could you write one about the lettuce?
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
Truly a story that evokes the deepest human emotion: laughter. And for that, you deserve a review.
Invisible.Person chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Oh, that was too good! That was so original! How did you come up with this idea? A tomato love story..what a crazy awesome story! Ahh, the ending killed me! "Hot, hot tomato sex"?! Priceless!
crimsonsnow0017 chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

That's it.

Anyways, this make me think of "Tomato Pretty" ( . ?id8203), a yaoi manga. Except your's is probably more realistic. Great job on this one, so cute and funny
anonymous chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
... There must be something seriously wrong with you for you to be able to write a mild slash story about tomatoes, but it's cute so I don't really care... which probably says that my mind is kind of messed up too... oh well.
MushroomKingdom chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Me being me was imagining them as pretty anime boys. Ha. Great story BTW.
mousegirl05 chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
Well, I believe you are well aware that this is both unique and entertaining as hell. Seriously, the last two lines of this piece just MAKE it. It is wonderful. I really liked Marzano and the way that 'Cas man' referred to him as his emo boyfriend.
ChocolateMilk2 chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
Oh wow. Well... that was intresting.

Can I become a vegetarian now? Oh wait, that'll involve tomatoes. Maybe a meateater carnivore? But then I'll get unhealthy...

Curse you, haunting author! :)
ShadowQueen1996 chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
...ya know what?

i was good the whole story but as soon as i clicked the reveiw button i had to stop and just about piss myself laughing and i forget what i was going to type 3

very nice job! D
Eclipsist chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
What the frick... THIS WAS EPIC... but it was very strange... way to think out of the box.
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