Reviews for Molly's Song
growing-up chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
applause.

this is phenomenal.
CountryGal17 chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
I have a friend who is anorexic so this poem really got to me. Its all true, every one just kind of minds their own business until its too late. Good job.
LAR chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
This is one of the most amazing things that you have ever written. I am insanely jealous of your writing skills.
Jessica Wolfheart chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
Wow, very powerful. I love the way you followed her descent. 5 gold stars XDD
Filipina chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
I liked the point you were trying to get across...But after reading it I know you could have written better.
Whirr chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
Oh wow. I love it!

I don't really know what to say... it's amazing :]

I loved how you changed the words in each chorus, so it was tracking her descent into bulimia. And it was so sad to see the last one in past tense.

But in a good way, for you. Lol.
kelsi bones chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
This can be a hard subject matter to write about without seeming cliché or unrealistic. The way you wrote this is amazing, and... wow, I don't even know what to say. I love it.

*favorites*

k.X
Billie.Joelle chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
Wow, oh my goodness, that was incredible! I love the lines "And they'll say 'slim' to her face/And 'skinny' behind her back" and how you changed it every chorus. This was incredible. great job
SummerBaby94 chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
This deffinately shows the truth to bulimia.