Reviews for Exposed
Katsuda chapter 2 . 7/6/2008
Wow, I don't envy Hayden, and it seems things are only getting worse for her.

Good handle on dialog.
Katsuda chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
Gritty and real. Actually makes you feel her pain.
Koki Enwai chapter 7 . 7/6/2008
Oh, wow. Rather intriguing. You haven't updated in a while, but I hope to see more from you soon.

Keep up the good work and thanks for the great read!

- Koki
languor chapter 7 . 5/27/2008
I'm very intrigued by this story, and I can't wait to see where you take it!
kitkatbunny chapter 6 . 3/18/2008
OMG stop leaving me hanging! You're so bad like that! Seriously though, good suspense. I like it. :)
kitkatbunny chapter 5 . 3/13/2008
I like it! I've always liked these kinds of stories. I tried to write one myself and quit, but maybe I'll go back and work on it more after reading this. If you want more constructive criticism, you can contact me anytime! Please finish and don't leave us hanging!
jellybeanmuncher chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
love your story so far! it's so enticing! i was on the edge if my seat the whole time since the beginning! hard to find stories that do that from the beginning and only two chapters in! i would love it if you could give my story a look see! it's new, as i am to this whole writing thing! can't wait for you to update!
Seraph.Annebelle chapter 4 . 2/23/2008
wow i like it why did she keep out the idsk if she doesnnt know what it it, write more!
SickButPretty chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
Pretty hard core. I like. I'm wondering why she wants the disk so bad tho... since she doesn't even know what it is?