I really like this. There isn't a lot of concrete imagery, which is what I tend to thrive on in my poetry (not always, though), but I still really like it. A very otherworldly, perceptual look at things, if that makes any sense. I do really like the simile about the world, but I keep wanting to read it as "the world is like a face I don't ever want to see again." That's just me. Really, though, nice work. I'll be keeping an eye out for more. Keep writing! :)

"the world is like a face I don't

want to see ever again"

I have this feeling all the time, but I never worded it so perfectly as you have here.

I love this poem.

apt title. powerful use of rhetoric. Love the first verse.