|Reviews for regret|
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
I really like this. There isn't a lot of concrete imagery, which is what I tend to thrive on in my poetry (not always, though), but I still really like it. A very otherworldly, perceptual look at things, if that makes any sense. I do really like the simile about the world, but I keep wanting to read it as "the world is like a face I don't ever want to see again." That's just me. Really, though, nice work. I'll be keeping an eye out for more. Keep writing! :)
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
"the world is like a face I don't
want to see ever again"
I have this feeling all the time, but I never worded it so perfectly as you have here.
I love this poem.
| Time To Change chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
apt title. powerful use of rhetoric. Love the first verse.