|Reviews for Puppet Strings new|
| whos this gabe character chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
i really enjoyed reading it and i'll come up with some plot suggestions later because at the momment i'm coming up blank:)
| 97thparis chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
This is very cool. It kept me on the edge of my seat and it's one of those stories you can't stop reading.
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
Pretty good, suspenseful and tense. I don't think it works as a one-shot though. It was like you ended the story right when the action was beginning. There has to be a way that his hunter hacked all his techonology, too.
As for why he's being hunted, maybe the reason could have something to do with his past, like someone he hurt, something to do with his family, that type of scenario. Just a suggestion though. Great writing with this.