Reviews for sparkles
fairies and snapple chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
I kind of love this. It's kind of really beautiful and sad in a lovely and bitter way that still leaves room for a bit of hope.
relapse into change chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
i wish i knew sign langange someday

and everything seems to be reminding me of hello by evanescence

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beautifulbeautiful.

(i really do suck at reviews.)
doctor's diagnosis chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
I like this, but I think the last stanza isn't really necesary. It would end much stronger in my opinion if you just ended it at "that loves what's left of me".
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
Pretty. I like your descriptions and the emotion in this, some interesting juxtaposition. Your poetry keeps getting better.

And congratulations on writing 154 things. I know this is kind of a random number to congratulate you on, but I just saw how much you wrote and it feels like it's deserving of being congratulated.
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
Great poem. Very interesting. Nice work. Have a fantastic day.

Twilight Starr