Reviews for doll, up in the tower
AnnekaK chapter 1 . 9/18/2015
Beautifully written.
DarkestChasm chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
I think there is a story that goes along with this... isn't there?
LeMaki chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
Wow. This is just amazing!
Very impressed chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
Kushe Gothel chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
I wish could read more from this two characters.
Slightly Ajar chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
Aaw, I wish you wouldn't let this rot on your hard drive. It's really good.

I like the format a lot, with the parenthesis and the dashes. Nicely done!
Sahk chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
This would be better with some more length~.
C.Gholy chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
Very powerful and short and sweet. I loved it
HurtMe chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
Ah, beautiful. This really touched me.
blackberrydream chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
Wow, that was beautiful. I wish it was longer because I feel like it has a lot of potential to be a great, intense, poignant story. I really hope this becomes something more.
lackluster chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
gah. this SHOULD be longer. i think if you expand on the idea, you'll really get something.

because right now, it's just a tease. and a really good one at that. love the ending.
Written chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
beautiful work, as always.
Kitten Arcane chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
Oh, very poetic and bittersweet. I really like it, nice work

kelsi bones chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
This is really cool ]

I know, that sounds kind of lame, but it is cool P

The repetition of "i hate you" makes this so intense.

In the Rye chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
Hmn. It was interesting enough for me to want it to be longer.