|Reviews for No Words|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
I like this... the short format and the flow is really great and the ending relating to the beginning is great.. and I love hte last line...
A few things:
what would he do then?/i don’t know./keep staring... I think keep staring should be a question... when I read it in my head that's how it came out anyway
What is a cam? that confused me.. maybe it's a cultural thing...
Also I'd put a comma after Danielle
Really great piece... your emotions are extremely evident in this piece... awesome job
PS If you're bored today check out the review game's review marathon... there's a link in my profile
| sweets555 chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
don't hate yourself. you're fantastic.
adding to favs