Reviews for Intrigue At The Crowned Jewel
WJosephusW chapter 1 . 6/23/2022
Looking forward to finishing this. Just the style and vivid use of dialogue reminds me of one of my favorite authors: Brandon Sanderson! Really enjoying so far.
Doodleonwalls chapter 30 . 11/30/2019
I read this years before I thought to make an account or bookmark/save it in any way. It was extremely memorable, though, and after a few hours of googling variations of 'fictionpress gay courtesan hypnosis', I finally found this again and binge-read it! It was glorious.
The Age of Awesomeness chapter 30 . 12/7/2017
This was an amazing story! I do hope you keep writing, because wowza! That was an amazingstory!

You did great on the plot and development of the characters, and the plot twist about him casting memory spells on himself was simply amazingly well written!
SpecNut chapter 30 . 9/10/2017
Just wanted you to know, I quite enjoyed this story. I have a deep-seated hatred that I reserve for romances...but for the purposes of this story (and a couple of your others) I have been converted. I hope you're still writing, because you're great at it!
Guest chapter 30 . 5/10/2016
Just rereading an old favourite. I forgot how funny the story is! Especially this chapter, I was in tears the whole time.
I also forgot how many plot twists there were, I was still surprised even reading this the second time round. (It's been a while though).
It was kinda weird seeing my name in your story (I have the same name as the Queen) and I guess I kind of know how people with common names feel now.
Thanks for writing this! I hope to see it published one day, and of course, I'd totally buy it.
bronsautracks chapter 2 . 9/12/2015
just in case you didn't think i was still obsessed with this, i still am. i love it so much. c:
Guest chapter 29 . 4/4/2015
hey i really love this storry! this is actually the second time ive read it and its really well written, ur characters are all lovely and well developed! the only thing that bugged me was the change in Sebastian's hair from the beginning, from black curls to red waves to red curls to black crimps. and how cameo was called it instead of the singular they, them ect. but anyways i loved it! and i was wondering if maybe u could right an epilogue? maybe with adran talking to his parents? and how their lives are after ect... that would be awesome if u wanted to do that!
Guest chapter 30 . 4/4/2015
Kaseytrue chapter 30 . 3/31/2015
I just thought you should know how much I love this story.
I rarely favorite stories, I just follow them, but this one is complete so I could do nothing else.
In addition it is 7 minutes until 2 in the morning and I have my Midterm for Math at 11.
You absolutely suck for writing a story so amazing that I could not stop reading until it was over.
Okay I'm sorry you do not suck you are absolutely amazing and I love this story so very much.
Thank You
Meka-mouse chapter 14 . 12/31/2014
I love love love this story. To the point that this is probably the 6th time I've read it. I only have one problem. In this chapter (14) towards the end just before Adrian falls asleep you mention him being under the influence of a pain spell when you're not supposed to know yet. I mentally berate myself each time I read it because I'm not supposed to know yet ;) thanks
Anon chapter 30 . 12/26/2014
Your story is perfect, there's not a thing I would change about it
Collins-A chapter 28 . 9/3/2014
I have to admit, I put off reading this story for years because the summary just did not catch my interest at all. But one of my friends, who I met through our mutual love of slash, demanded it of me, and I am so, soo happy I did.
It was well written, the plot made sense, I loved the culture, and the humor, and the imagery and the all the characters with all my heart. I actually cried a little when Sebastian described how he felt about leaving the Jewel. you put into words such bittersweet nostalgia and I loved it.

If you ever published this in hardcopy, I would definitely buy it. No doubt.

Thank you for writing this!
R. Ficst chapter 2 . 6/5/2014
I came back for a re-read and I'm loving it.

I must say, I was feeling kind of awful, anxious and nauseous from my crappy morning and some other things, but the reading was steadily cheering me up, and when it got to: "Somewhere, I was sure someone was finding my distress hilarious. I bitterly hoped they at least were happy." I did a bit of a double take, because it works as something a person says in such a situation, but it also speaks in a bit of breaking the fourth wall as you the author did make me the reader happy from laughter at it.
Guest chapter 28 . 4/8/2014
Great story! I especially loved how you developed the characters and the plot twists were unusual and fascinating. The storyline has truly captivated me. I still have some questions that I feel we're not answered, but have seen that you're working on other books in the same universe, perhaps you will enlighten us there:) unfortunately, there are still a lot of typos, although they do not occur frequently enough to really distract me/us/the reader. But should you ever plan to revisit the story and correct some of them, please pay special attention to the difference between later and latter, bear and bare as well as accent and assent. Those were the only recurring ones that caught my eye... Thanks a lot for this fantastic story, I'm looking forward to read your other works;)
Becca chapter 16 . 3/31/2014
This was really confusing to read.
Does Adrian honestly know he's Rose Quartz? Did you originally write it so he would not, go back and edit it and forget to edit the rest?
So confused.
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