Reviews for Intrigue At The Crowned Jewel
K chapter 30 . 9/30/2013
Absolutely spiffing!
liende chapter 17 . 9/7/2013
I just wanted to drop by and say that I absolutely love this story. Your writing style is brilliant, and the amount of research you put into each chapter is admirable. I read your A/Ns at the bottom of the chapter and feel inferior because I don't put half as much work into my stories as you do :'D
For all his miscomings, I absolutely adore Sebastian -although my favorite character would probably be either Jade or Diamond.
There was just one thing I thought was strange in this chapter, though. Around the beginning, Lime Jade mentions a 'guan xi relationship'. If this was meant to be Chinese (as I thought it was), it wouldn't really be grammatically correct? 'Guan xi' means 'relationship' in Chinese -so Jade basically said 'relationship relationship', rather than 'give-and-take relationship', as Sebastian intepreted it.
Anonymous chapter 16 . 4/27/2013
Two things I am confused about:
1) Sebastian doesn't change his face when he meets Adrian as Rose, or when he meets him as Mckaw, so basically the only things different about those two personas are their voices, the color of their hair, and, to some extent, their body shape, right? So why couldn't Adrian see that their faces were identical?
2) Also in this chapter Sebastian mentions he doesn't think Adrian would go so far as to make up a fake family and occupation and forge a family portrait to match, just to hide his royal heritage. But if he is really the prince, then wouldn't that level of caution be understandable? Considering his extreme hatred of fanfare, something he knew everyone would shower over him if he introduced himself as the prince of the realm, wouldn't he want to thoroughly hide that fact? And since Sebastian knows this aspect of Adrian well, wouldn't he consider that?

That being said, I REALLY love this story! I can't wait to finish it and you write beautifully :)
KARKAT VANTAS chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
DeadnightWarrior chapter 28 . 3/24/2013
Now this is a funny thing. I haven't been visiting this site in many, many years, and suddenly (in the middle of a night mind you) I remember a story I once read and thought was amazing. However the only things I could recall, besides the amazing-ness, were the general idea of the story and the name of one character, Black Viper. It took me some time to find this story and I was happy to note that it was as good as I had remembered, though I think you may have edited the story somewhat?

Well. Um. I'm afraid I don't really have anything constructive to say, just thought to leave a review and wonder at the realization that I didn't do so back when I first read this. Anyway, thanks for the enjoyable read, once again!
Guest chapter 24 . 3/6/2013
yeah i thought that it was covered as they're all resistant to him because of diluted humanity...
opelleam chapter 30 . 12/10/2012
I finished your story yesterday after a week of complete immersion! I dit nothing outside of my RL obligation except reading your story and i really, really love it.
Thanks a lot for sharing it!
Itsa Mia chapter 30 . 10/23/2012
So you've ruined my life by literally taking up every second of spare time I had between work and school and devoting it to making me read your story. How dare you. I haven't done homework in days. (but really I haven't done homework in months so pfttt)
I kind of love you. It was tons of fun reading this. I hate you though. because it's overrrrr. jk jk jk. but really what's a better compliment than adoring hatred, right?
What should I do with my life now? *aimless*
Itsa Mia chapter 9 . 10/16/2012
oh dear lord my heart literally stopped when he said adrian and i thought it was voiced but then i was still recovering from the heart attack at the end anyway.
Vallucast chapter 24 . 10/3/2012
Sometimes, I think that thinking too much about avoiding loophole will result in nothing written at all. Take one thing such as, magic as fickle things. You mentioned that the mixed-breed rarely reach adulthood and that magic is the only thing that tied them together to be able to function almost-normally, instead that magic either kill the baby still in womb. That would be more rational, in my perception, that the unborn either live or die, since in very early process of foetus is either it live or die under duress (say something like different beings forced being together).
R. Ficst chapter 28 . 9/13/2012
Very twisted and convoluted, but as I'm pretty sure that was your aim, I wish to assure you of your success. Very minimal appearance of typos, so good work with your editing. The story was overall very fun and I enjoyed the characters and the love. Thank you so much for posting!
stregamari chapter 22 . 7/28/2012
Wtf? Why didnt they consummate their relationship right away! He was there to bang Rose Quartz anyway, and had the whole day ready for that?
stregamari chapter 7 . 7/27/2012
I am loving this story, this chapter in particular. We learn so much about Sebastian's personality and character, that he is so patient and wonderful with people who are vulnerable and have a "need" and that the "viper" comes out to deal with everyone else!
Guest chapter 26 . 7/9/2012
"I thought knew at the time when I cast the blessing, an honor bestowed upon me for a reason I will shortly detail, what I was doing did you omit an "I"?

I nodded my accent assent?

Adrian reached up, touching his forehead lightly to his fingers, than said, "Is this the reason you became suddenly interested in finding me?" then?

I have mixed feelings about it all, but I did enjoy the emperor's son and his earlier appearance. :)
Guest chapter 25 . 7/9/2012

Fuck? Where did that come from? I was under the impression that Adrian did not have such vocabulary in his arsenal. Sure, I didn't expect him to speak similarly to that Joseph Ducreux meme... okay. yes. I did, lol.

Anywho. That dream-mirror sequence from before certainly was something.
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