Reviews for motionloveless
Basic Ignorance chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
This one is my far.

I am not as fast of a reader as you are so forgive me.

This makes me feel like you have someone who likes to cheat

motion is him going from one girl to another and so on

he is restless

does not want to settle down

it is nice to get a focused picture from the lense of my life


haha but all in all i really do like this one
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
"just a blur in my polaroid life;" works well in this to accomplish the differences in the speaker and the individual portrayed in the scene. I like how this concentrates on the central theme, and blooms from there. Good write. MD:77.
ce n'est pas que je m'appelle chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
I love this. The imagery is amazing, welcome to my favorites list!
The Melancholy Cocoa Bean chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
'just a blur in my polaroid life;'

this piece has a kinda rhythm to it, not too fast and not too slow

i like it a lot. there's something about it - maybe i just relate to it - i don't know. but yeah, it's pretty amazing

keep it up :)
lost for words chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
Very much like it, great comparison and wording. Favourite line: "(you’re splitting seconds as i’m staring)"