That's fucking intense! I wonder who will walk in on them like that.

i love this story! i think for shane and lyra that there should be another guy and it end up badly for some reason or other(if its ryan then hopefully not that badly) and the shane is there to save the day and make lyra better. even though it cliche it is a good story line. besides who doesnt like a bit of clich now and then. of corse the whole parents marrying thing is an issue. dont know how thats gonna be gotten not like anyone want them to brake up.

and whats happening with her and harry? i get that they have been friends for ages but that is a wee bit too close. dont think that shane is liking it either lol ;)o can you please explain what harry thinks about their relationship.

oh and one last thing. how much longer is lindsay going to be in the picture. she isn't nice. of corse she does add stuff to the story line and makes it more interesting with shane and lyra. maybe she could be gotten rid of with something dramatic. since lyra is supposed to be a drama queen that will fit into the story.

so, anyway, now that iv finshed basicly telling you how to write the story( really sorry bout that. hope it isnt taken in the wrong way)you story is really good. it is one of the best ones that i have read. it has many layers of storyline and enough characters to make it interesting but not so much that names are forgotten. so ill say it again... i LOVE this story!cant wait for the naxt chaps!

I love this chapter. I was very happy when I saw that you updated this story. And no I don't have a Shane. I know one. As always keep up the good work.

Ooh, vicious. Sawyer didn't deserve that (or did I miss something? Dunno).

Which part of your foot did you break?

i feel kind of bad for shane

he is afraid to let people in

so it's kind of sad

i also feel bad because it's obvious he's in love with her, but he just made it difficult to actually getting together with her because of the whole friend thing..

lol

update soon!

Plz update soon

I want them to kiss again!

I like Shane. He is so amusing especially when he is jealous. So I really can’t wait to read your next chapters. Actually Shane has a very similar personality with a guy I knew. I like how he is keeping his feelings to himself (although if you are the girl liking him, you hate the fact that you don’t understand him most of the time). It would be very exciting to see Lyra’s actions and her tries to get to know him better. Shane is so different than the rest of his brothers and more quiet, like a mystery waiting for Lyra to discover. And everyone knows Lyra loves mysteries (correct me if I‘m wrong).

Again, keep up the great work.

Wow. That was such a good chapter.I love Shane and Lyra's realashonship, there so cute! (Especilly Shane, but he's cute all the time ;D.)I love seeing them trying to deny there feelings.

Update soon,

EvErY rOsE hAs ItS tHoRnS

x

aw

deep down Shane's a real sweetheart

lol

it wasn't really confusing, actually for me it cleared up some questions that i had!

anywho

update soon!

Great story!

I love it!

I'm absolutely addicted.

Love the characters.

So Lyra and Shane are ending up together right?

Well anyway I can't wait for more.

Please update as soon as you can!

Thanks.

I don't think this chapter is weird or confusing. In my opinion it is a nice change to see Shane's POV. I like this chapter and the way you described his emotions.

I really like the plot and the characters.

You've done a great work!

Oh... this is a good long chapter. Anyhow... I am excited to know how Shane is feeling... gosh... I can't wait until he takes control of his feeling and make her his.. hahaha... .lol... I just love it when people don't realize what they have in front of them until it is almost too late... but I have a feeling that she'll knock him to the point of no return and he'll somehow become her slavelover... I just love his macho-ness... he's quiet, sexy and HOT HOT HOT... Gosh... I hope to see some action soon... maybe getting him so jealous or pissed off that he just takes it out with a hot passinate kiss... oh... gosh.. I will be waiting for the next chapter. Thanks for replying... makes me happy that you know there are many people out here reading your story.

cool! loved it...gotta do hw, so this review is gonna be pretty short. hehehs

Hey! totally awesome chapter! But some of the wording was weird at the start, and it was slightly confusing but all straightened out eventually! It did give insight into the characters and how they appear to others aswell. Lindsay is a total bitch by the way! hate her! love the story !