Reviews for Too close for comfort
LittleCook2008 chapter 8 . 5/7/2008
I Love This Story! Toby is such a cutesy little brother! now who i wonder, is in her room? stupid annoying cliffhanger!
Hang chapter 8 . 5/7/2008
Wow... your story is awesome. I can't wait to read more. You're good. You really got me going there. At first.. I thought she was going to hit it off with Mike but I'm glad it's with Shane. I think you made a good decision. About Devon... nothing much about that guy yet... all I got from him is that he's just a friend of theirs and we don't really know his personality yet. Toby is a cutey, I think having him as a little brother to talk to is funny and good. He seems like a serious kid who is smart and intelligent. I can't wait to read more. Thanks.
Kbelle1 chapter 8 . 5/7/2008
another cliffhanger:) Very good Chapter.
under the bed chapter 7 . 5/6/2008
Ooh! SUSPENSE! Dun dun dun!
DreamsOnlyLastForTheNight chapter 7 . 5/6/2008
I love this story so far!

Update soon!
lenore87 chapter 7 . 5/6/2008
ahh i'm loving your story! cant wait to read more! hoping the guy is shane? .
WriterGurl123 chapter 7 . 5/6/2008
Damn it! Of course you found a way to have a cliff hanger! I think it's Shane, but I could be wrong.

Post More Soon!
KLAM chapter 1 . 5/6/2008
LOVE the story update soon!
Wheresmyprince chapter 7 . 5/6/2008
Oh My GOD

I need to know who kissed her.

I think i know

but i want to know for sure.

So Please Hurry up and post the story :]
Kbelle1 chapter 7 . 5/6/2008
Good Chapter. Cliffhanger! cant wait till next one
doodlebug19 chapter 3 . 4/27/2008
lovess it! update soon!
Wheresmyprince chapter 6 . 4/26/2008
Super cute.I really love this Story.

Can't wait to read what happens next
under the bed chapter 6 . 4/26/2008
Buying that much stuff is just scary.
sleepies chapter 6 . 4/25/2008
omg! so all those clothes tat she bought were actually real? and this chapter wasn't really completely on mike!*pouts* lols jk, it doesn't really matter. tehes - wonder wat the guys left for...
WriterGurl123 chapter 6 . 4/25/2008
This is a really funny story! You're doing a great job with this and even though he completely flipped out and went bananas, I'm still in love with Shane. Ryan is a sweetie too, but I still like Shane. I just hope he comes to his senses and apologizes to Lyr.

Post More Soon!
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