I really like the plot so far. The only thing is that I noticed a lot of grammar mistakes and typos. If you can fix that it'll be even better. :) PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

ryan is so sweet! and omg! the dont't take my teddy part was halarious! lols

aw...yea shane is cool, but idk, i kinda like mike better. lols

o.O DON"T THROW UR COMPUTER OUT THE WINDOW! lols

and aww...shane was blushing! cute! lols -

OMG! this story is SOO funny so far! i couldn't help laughing wen i read this chapter. i wonder if mike has feelings for lyra...is tat the reason for his strange behavior towards her since they were ready to leave for london? or was it just because he was really just trying to be brotherly to her?

i saw this maderin show tat started out some wat like this! its called devil besides me. the same thing happend where this girl's parents ending up marrying this guy who was someone tat she sort of hated. and the guy had to stay at the girl's place too, and then they got to together at the end of the movie.

I like it. Toby is adorable, how old is he?

Hm, well, that WOULD have been unexpected.

Can he not fall in love with her.

I don't want her to break his heart.

Because i know she'll just fall in love with Shane.

*sigh*

I'll like whatever you do, so update soon :]

hey seetie im so sorry i have read this one and corected it i havent een on the copmputer for a very long time i have had so much to catch up on and tihs is one one of them so ill do it it some time in the next coupe of days ok. i love this and i love the brothers they are soo cool. um i fell really bad the i havnt editted any of it so im going to do it as quickly as poss. im sorry again i feel really bad _

I am falling for him as well.

Shane is just so...

There are no words for it.

I just loved this chapter.

I can't wait for the next one :D

THAT'S not how you wear a SHOE! *cough*

hey.I LOVE YOUR FIC ! Its so good, i wish i could write like you lol!

I know what you mean by falling for Shane, I think I am too! Hes so cute, I can almost imagin hes real lol, God I'm a wierdo! Is Lyra and Shane the main pairing for this fic? I hope so lol, and just cus there step-siblings doesn't stop them getting together! I think that you should do a chappy in Shane's view point, I duno probable a stupid idea, but it would be interesting to see how Shane feels about Lyra.

I also love TOBY! Hes so cute, how old is he supose to be?

anyways,please update SOON, I cant wait for the next chapter!

love you,

EvErY rOsE hAs ItS tHoRnS

x

I really really really liked this chapter.

Shane seems so cute like in the end when he just wanted her to be there. :]

Who's Cam I thought there other brother was called Toby.

I really like this story so far its really good. Hope you write more soon!

Colleen