Reviews for Things I hate about you
Tily Everly chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
Another aw is in order . . . AWW! What the hell happened to happy endings!
Looking for Bliss chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
Ah... I love this! I love the way it's hate because of love... Very well written! -goes looking for other stuff after ading to favs- D
PoetryQueen chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
Your poem flowed very nicely. I get the hate and love thing. It is a really good poem and I liked it. I found one error, you had the words, It such a shame. There should be an, "is," in there. Other than that little error, great job!
2hated2care chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
i like how this is all worded up with the whole hate thing. sic
MyWorldisBlack chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
i know what that's like! you know how much you care about them and love them but dont want it all to end. its annoying!
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
i loved the last two lines. SUPER DUPER!
October Sun chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
Ooh...great work. That's just about all I can say for it. Suspenseful...nearly-tragic-but-actually-not, etc. Nice.
totallyinspired chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
mum! its rated K for the MILD swearing. i love you too. thanks for the review. i guess.
Ammi chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
Bit too lovy dovy for my liking. And swearing? tut tut!

Get over it child!
no secrets no lies chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
That was so sweet and sad too. Reminded me a little of 10 things i hate about you- but yours was better! :)
little-chibi-girl chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
this is cute. it's hard to know what direction your were going with this, which I think was a good thing for this particular poem because I wanted to know what would happen and why she hated him even though he called her pretty. so that was cool. I also like these parts:

"What a fool I am,

Oh, poor, poor me".

"It such a shame,

Oh, what a pity,"

it made it seem more lighthearted.

I thought if you stopped with this line: "How utterly in love with you I was trying, Not to show." it might've been more powerful, but not as explanatory. I like those endings where they're kept open, so that's why I said that. (so that was just personal preference)

So yeah, really great poem, I enjoyed it a lot!
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
So very cute! I love this adding to favs!

XKristie MarieX
Hopelessly Cliche chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
This was a great poem, it really was heart warming to read! Write more! :D
purple x pen chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
I'm guessing this piece was inspired by '10 things i hate about you', very good effort and its actually funny how i can relate to a lot of this, well done.
doctor's diagnosis chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
A little cliche, yes. But I like it. The whole getting hurt by someone saying they love you thing because they don't mean it the way you want? Yeah, I have totally been there. Multipul times by the same person. Whatajerk. And oh goodness, he's got this amazing smile that just makes me melt, and he gets my jokes. Oh dear, I'm gushing. Alright, I'll stop now. Nice rhyme, by the way.