Reviews for I Said I'm Fine
theinfinitebee chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
Since you've reviewed so many of my poems, I'm doing likewise.

I love this one, especially ["You can't keep doing this to yourself."

Wanna bet?]

I don't know how many times I've heard this in the past months, or how many more I've said it.

I think it's brilliant that you started with a quote. Marvelous imagery, also. Simply amazing.
half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
konban wa

Beautiful imagery! I am astonished. Not that I didn't expect such stunning work from you, but I just... this is truly just beautiful. No other word for it.

"No, my favorite part is

the cold, sharp metal.

The kind that slices skin."

I'm glad you split it into separate sentences and skipped lines for it. It made it not connect so that when you read the last part, it sent shivers down your spine. Or my spine at the very least. *shrug*

Ki o tsukete

-Shan-
Xavier Honre chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
Hmm, this is a little different, but I like it. It offeres a point of view that most people miss. Not that the point of view would change a lot of opinions...
just.because.lemonade.stand chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
ah!

i loved it. i liked how you started with a quote. nice job :]

[i told you my reviews were bad]