Reviews for The Oliver Sonnets
Yoroy chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
Drivel. The rhymes were mostly forced and the flow was choppy at best. Not to mention the few typos there were. the theme of it was just so...common. It needed a lot of spicing up which you didn't do. 3/10
relapse into change chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
god, i'm speachless, i don't know what to say really

there's so much emotion in this so, and 'II' beautiful

i don't feel right to critize this in any way (even though

i didn't even spell critize right) D:
the-foresight chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
It's always a danger using sonnets that the poem feels structured and forced. I didn't get this feel with these, I thought they flowed quite eloquently. Maybe at times the rhymes felt obvious, but your voice is brought across well.