Again, you wrote about...me. I am amazed by this. Fantastic.

I've seen you write better, yes, but for five minutes in class?

This is fantastic.

I feel free simply because I read it.

How is it that you can have me cracking up one minute and near tears the next? This is...me. I mean, you have described me perfectly.

*Claps*

i really like illusion... sounds a lot like me... and what I'm going through.

Pretty cool! I get my song ideas during school too, though I try to pay attention most of the time. Rhyming would be a further improvement and make your songs more interesting, but I can sense the rhythm. Amazing what comes up when you're bored