Reviews for Rising Thoughts
svuobsessor chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
love the poem...first occurence I have ever seen where someone besides me and my best friend used the word fantastical...nice work!
Jazzball chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
welcome to the mind of me

welcome to the mind to be

heh I don't know buddy, it's pretty good already. Very raw and gritty... I don't know, theres something about the word choice that seems hard and to the point. Can't really place what it is though.