Reviews for My Best Punch |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwwwwwwwww cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fffuffffy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol i like that she punched him, makes a good story even betterP. cute) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Romantic and humorous :) Funny at the same time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha! loved the last line:) you wrote FLuffy Pillows? I ADORE THAT STORY:) I dunno why i havent stalked (not creepily:P) your profile before!lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Towards the ending was a bit fast-paced and a tad confusing, but still cute nonetheless. You did amazing considering this was your first one-shot. Great work :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha. good punch! I'll have to give it a try... |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this storii was realli gud keep it up and this is a realli gud storie once again! Luv it on a scale to 1-100 yhu get a 100 |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! OMG! I LUV IT! IT JUST SO ROMANTIC! IT WAS OFF THE CHAIN! I LIKE JAKE BLC THE WAY YOU PUBLISH IT HE SEEM QUIET! LENA IS SOMETHING LIKE ME, HAVE A FRIEND AND LIKE HIM BUT DON'T WANNA TELL HIM |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cuute! Yes, i've officially run out of words to say :p |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a good story. I did like it and it somehow popped in my head yesterday. (That is how I distinguish a story that is good and bad haha) Well the only thing I didn't like was that at the end.. it was just really spaced out and not in paragraphs. I get that it kinda works like that, but I've grown to like things in paragraphs. But that is my only thing that I didn't like. It is sad that he thinks everything bad happens to him. That is such a pessimistic way of looking at things. But I guess having parents being divorced isn't going to give you too much hope either. Love the story! ~*~Ngoc1231~*~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh... I think I'm going to try that... see if it gets me anywhere, non? XD Heh heh, cutte. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() its cute :) lol funny how she punched him xD |