So cliché and I LOVE it! J

ealousy is one of my favorite subjects in a lovestory! (especially in fluff)

I could just melt right here! *die*

HAHAHHA so cute!

xx

cute

cute

wow this is a great story for a first oneshot :)

punching? different...but it works well for this story so keep it up :D

for ur first oneshot, its really good

ooh i really like it. it could easily come into something more. i wish i could see more. it's up to you. but i still like it as a one shot.

BRILLIANT! (I'm still laughing from when she punched him). How in the world did you think of it? It's brilliant. 6 out of five stars.

wow that punch gotta hurt...but o well...at least they are together at the end...lol...aww that sweet...i like it...that is a good one shot...bye..bye..

wow, when I finished this story I actually said: 'Oh my God, this was f*ing(but the whole thing, just didn't think it would be polite) great!' and proceeded to bust out laughing but yeah...it was very good specially for a first oneshot. D

this was cute...but a bit rushed.

Good story, the ending seemed a bit rushed but overall it was a fantastic first oneshot :)

Let that one line be the defining and most hilarious line in the story.

"Because I love you, you moron!"

it was a bit slow, but i loved the punching part though!

This was kinda choppy and abrupt, and despite the clicheness, I loved it because it was original and funny. (: Fantastic first oneshot (it's hard to get one of those - I would know) and a super spiffy addition from woodstock1969 to our c2. (: