Very short but very cute. I liked it. Some spelling changes but who cares? Lol

I LOVE the fact that she punched him! That was so cutte! I mean, the ending...it was...wow. Just wow. Can I leave it at that?

Lovely! Just... lovely. Not much more to say. You're great.

-Biohazard

Aww, cliches really do have an endearing charm to them, don't they? Love boys getting jealous over the girl types, and if they are your best friends who have loved you since forever... kuddos!

aw...so cute. great oneshot ]

OH MY GOD! This was SO cute! (sigh)...I love this story, I really do! Go you!

cute (:

oh yea uh huh! bam bam bam bam bam (singing) that was so good! that was so god! (still singing) *now stopping* lol i like it very much, i always like these stories :)

overly cheesy

it was okay tho (

OH MY FREAKING GOODNESS. OH MY FREAKING GOODNESS. OH MY FREAKING GOODNESS.

You sure know how to make a girl squeal in happiness over your stories, don't you? :)

AWH! This was so cute. I love it. D

Love,

Becca

Punches are good. Smart girl. Like the story! Very cute!

Liked it? I LOVED it!

It was well written, and had a good plot.

I liked how she punched him before they kissed.

Great job

Haha, I loved how she punched him-totally original. Usually it's all, "KISS ME NOW!" and then they get together...well, a kiss is always good, but I liked how Lena went about doing it :D

Loved it!

~Mia

YAAYY! Fluff :D! There were a few minor typos throughout the story, but nothing major... great job :D!

Sarah :) x

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