|Reviews for Fallen Angel|
| Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
I liked the summary that you wrote first up, gave me a little bit of a smile. The last line is also good, turning from hailed angel to fraud, it can happen just like that can't it?
Keep it up.
| WickedSilence chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
I really like this poem. The words are such that they force the reader to think and think hard. The images are so emotive, and the story practically calls out to the reader. Although, might I suggest some additional line breaks? I think it's good as is, but perhaps a few more line breaks would make the choppy phrases have even more of an impact? Overall, it's a good poem. Cheers!