|Reviews for Tundra|
| Luma chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
wow, this was wonderfully written. I completely love it, every word. Keep writing,
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
I like it, very good. Favourite part is
"Blithely looking at the horizon
on the bottom
of the sea."
My only suggestion is that
"would be easier to break
that lower part of the face off."
sounds kind of awkward, and I think
"would be easier to break off
that lower part of teh face."
would sound better. Nice job.
| tini5585 chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
Very true, the eyes don't lie. People tend to glance over the eyes and look at facial expressions, which can easily be manipulated to fit the mood you want to portray. Interesting. :)