Reviews for I
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
Written chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
I used to have formatting issues with fp all the time, but then I sort of just stopped formatting. sad day.

I liked this one. it's fairly accessible and the repetition is nice. you manage to convey the feelings of frustration all too well! good job, I guess.

when I saw the letters 'e' and 'd' underlined, I thought of eating disorder. that really had nothing to do with the poem, so I really don't know. what DID you mean by it?
casi chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
if its me you need to scream at... feel free, i'm fine with it.

if you need to talk (and feel up to it or fine or w/e) i'm always here.

love ya

simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
I like how you title it I so you can omit it from the rest of the piece and I love the repetition in the piece and how you change parenthesize the one part that varies... one question.. why did you only underline the e & d? it was interesting, but I couldnt figure out the reasoning

PS thanks for your review
goodlifesalesman chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
this is very well written; you can feel the emotion just by reading it.

great job :]
sweets555 chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
well, im glad you know you shouldn't cut, but i'm still worried that you might. so even if you aren't talking about it, if you just wanna babble blindly, im here.

great job.