Reviews for Clearing the Shadows
KUNGFUFIGHTING chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
! II LOVE IT! HEEHEE POINTLESS CAPITALIZATION AND TOO MANY LETTERS
Kalista Jia chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
Gorgeous description!

"Whim drinks the blood, takes it as her own, and the forest fades from black to red as the tainted wounds of the soul are purified."

(That line is so darkly beautiful!)

I am really in awe throughout the whole short story! Their love is so strong. I am jealous lol.

I enjoy reading how the boy is willing to sacrifice his physical body for his love. Extremely touching. Then the ending just makes the readers want to cry and smile at the same time.

Beautiful indeed.
Tawny Owl chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
Thought this was really beautiful. Both the style and the description (even when the boy is being hurt – which made it more effective in a way.) You can sort of understand that the girl and the demon are linked, but maybe not in the exact way you put in your author’s note. Doesn’t matter though it still works. I’m interested to see where it is all heading, so I hope your big idea all comes together soon. Good luck with it.