Thanks for making me cry :)

Mish xx

Aww.. That was so sad. Very touching. Awesome story!

Such a sad one-shot, but very well-written!

This was so good..oh, I feel like crying! They didn't know each other for long, but that made this even more profound. Really great job.

Wow this is beautiful. Great pace - I liked how you intertwined the italicised lines with the story to add to that feeling of reminiscing. You closed the story really well, too! Loved the subtle emotion, the ache of longing you brought out.

Nice work.

Wow, it is really poetic, I like it, you are a good author,

Oh my god! Okay, can I just say that that was absolutly AMAZING! I'm crying and can't get over the fact that this is THAT good! Awesome!

~Carly

that was freaking amazing. I mean like i'm almost crying right now. God that was amzing. well obvously i loved it. I think that your summery was great. thats what drew me to the story. that and the link rockfan put in her profiler. but yeah i loved it tons. .

that was really good. sad as heck though.

Great story. It's so sad. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

...oh my god that was BEAUTIFUL..you got me to cry *sniff sniff* :(

aww its so sad..but i love it nice work

xo's.

This is a really great story. The pace is magnificent and wonderful.

Honestly I didn't think the narrator was female until the phone call. I re-read a few times and can't really find out the gender. I had imagined it to be a guy. I don't know, maybe you did establish this and I just missed it.

The snapshot style is very good. Your start paragraphs and end them just right. There isn't any needless words. I can tell you've tried to strip this down to the bare essentials and keep the story. Well Done!

I don't agree with the ending. She gets in her car and...I'd really like to know. The story is very good overall. The ending is great, but I'm the kind of person that looks for resolve. Does she find another love? Is her pain gone after that one day or visiting his grave? For the moment the spinning seems to make it all go away.

Where at in her life is she retelling the story? Is she on a rocking chair? Has it been twenty years? Has her nostalgia turned this into such a great story? Where is she now and how is she doing?

Just a few questions. This story really made me think after reading it.

OMG (let me wipe my face). That was so...just so... you know. I can't describe it! It's wonderful and so beautifully written!