|Reviews for Discordant|
| I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
I really like the beginning! Suggestion for line 10: move carefully so it reads "sift carefully through my soul". It reads better in my mind. I really like the last line of the 4th stanza as well!
| steel winged angel chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
Very nicely done. Your metaphors are always so unique.