Reviews for The Love of Madeline
poo-anonymous chapter 11 . 7/25/2008
Happy ending! WO!
poo-anonymous chapter 10 . 7/25/2008
“Yeah, well San Diego isn’t that far from San Francisco, so I can still visit and we can hang out on the weekends and stuff,”

XD.. San Francisco is like 400 miles away from San Diego. I doubt they'll be visiting on weekends.
poo-anonymous chapter 7 . 7/25/2008
HAH! They are soo gay. And blah, I am angry with Madeline right now. Just cough up the truth, darn it!
poo-anonymous chapter 6 . 7/25/2008
I don't understand why she would do all of this. Lying to herself and staying in a washed-out relationship.

Defiantly does not equal definitely.
poo-anonymous chapter 3 . 7/25/2008
Oh my.. Are Demetrio and Simon in a gay relationship? I think so.

"Fine than,"

than should be then.
poo-anonymous chapter 2 . 7/25/2008
I like this story a lot. My only critiques are that won't has an apostrophe and adrenaline is spelled with an e. )
0.0 NightRiders 0.0 chapter 11 . 7/3/2008
very nice, but i beloeve the ending was too rushed
Slayin-Em chapter 11 . 6/24/2008
Aw great ending! I read it earlier, but didn't have a chance to review. I all around loved this story, it was written really realistically and not just slathered with sex, which is hard to find. So great job on creating a really good story, can't wait to see your future works!
Phoebe Majere chapter 11 . 6/19/2008
YES! AWESOME ENDING!
PrettyAwkward chapter 11 . 6/19/2008
Aw, it's the end. It was a bumpy ride of a story, but it made it to the end. I'll be on the look out for new ones. Was good.
Phoebe Majere chapter 10 . 6/17/2008
Hmm...I don't know how to respond to this chapter...it was good, actually it was awesome don't get me wrong! I just think Demetrio acted a little too quickly, but I guess that can happen. And then the ending of us finding out about Simon too, it was really confusing.

All in all, I loved this story. You are definitely staying on my fav. authours list forever and ever "honey doodles" Hahaha! Is this the end chapter too? Oh, please do another story or something. I love the way you right too!
Slayin-Em chapter 10 . 6/16/2008
omg how freaking cute! i'm so glad everything worked out.. is this the last chapter though? you didn't say anything about it being the end but it sorta seemed like it. either way, awesome job i totally loved it.
all you need is oxygen chapter 10 . 6/15/2008
This is an amazing story. I love the characters and the plot, and everything.

Keep it up!
PrettyAwkward chapter 9 . 6/11/2008
I knew something like that was going on with Demetrio, but glad it's happening cause now Sophie and her are together. Wonder how everything is going to get out in the open. Update.
YourSunshine17 chapter 9 . 6/11/2008
OMG this was all so sweet. finish! more!

/ria
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