|Reviews for The Streetlights' Orange Glow|
| elisefey chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
I really like this; it's got a nicely soft tension to it and the ending twist was perfect.
| ThornlessRose chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
Wow, that was superbly written with just the kind of twist I like at the end. i'm definatly favoriting it. I'm amazed at how well you can describe things, it's like you were born to write. Congrats. I will definatly check out more of your stories.
| killer chipmunk chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
I must say that, that may be close to the most confusing thing I've
ever there two people there or not?Or is just one person with
another person inside it's head?
| defola chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
I really dig some of your lines. They mix in splendidly with the image you create and taking it to a deeper level, and really leave quite an impact. Like, the one line about the sound traveling farther because it has nothing for it to dent.
I would suggest a revision of tense. You frequently start a paragraph in past tense, work in some present tense, and then end with more past tense. Things like that interrupt the flow of a story.