Reviews for I Am The Blossom
Long Island Iced Tea chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
forestwater chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
lovely poem. you should write more poetry; you're very good.
horseluv chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
this is such a great poem! i love it! XD keep writing!
Rem chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
I love it! I think you should write some more, personally, but that because I enjoy your writing.
Ghost of Bloodsea chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
Waugh! I give it a majillion times love! (And I are win at grammar, yes?)

The imagery is pleasing, the words flow nicely, and the overall concept plays out well.

The poem itself got ten out of ten. It was a little awkward in the middle, but you get major bonus points for mentioning pollen and bees while speaking about being a virgin. Seriously, major bonus points.


(P.S. Zheyne, to whom I've just read this over the phone, agrees with me.)
writing-addict77 chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
wow. that was really good! love it!
Kidwiththecap chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
Aw . . . That was beautiful.

It was sweet, and a little sad . . . but not too sad, more hopeful